Crafting Dialogue

Dialogue is one of the tale-tell signs of believability for characters in writing. “Hello,” Michael said. “Anna, it’s been nearly seventeen years since I’ve last seen you. My, you look the same. Brown hair, brown eyes, about five feet, six inches.” “Hi Michael,” Anna said. “It’s been so long since I’ve seen you. I’ve recently…

How to Edit a Chapter

The secret every one of us learns after many years of writing is that writing is not just about that flash of inspiration. It is mostly about re-writing and editing. Lots of it. When editing your chapters, I suggest the following: Read it aloud and fix any sentence that sounds stilted. Check your dialogue. Is…

He Said, She Said

In other words, dialogue tags. Dialogue tags are words that identify the speaker. Dialogue, at its best, is tricky; at its worst, nightmarish. But get it right and you have got one of your main ingredients of your novel nailed. However, trying to write great dialogue that moves your story along and is not stilted…